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do you want me to quote this one too? Hey when did you draw 0.o!

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rofl do you get paid for your advertisments because i want to ><"!
anyways you know how I work. and here i go.
This being an unknown, i can really research abou the character but that doesnt really matter.
First I'd like to say that the textures match perfectly not like some i can mention which have a high quality scan and a low quality background. Godo work!
Well the mood conveys loneliness and so does the texture and the work which looked like it came out of a canvas. The girl looks like she was about to pour a river of tears.
anyways i have to go and i think this is really rushed buttt:
this thing is so good i think i have to give you a 10/10
you are the first XD.
~~
seeya sukumei-chan/san

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lol nice. Rofl you didnt work tony taka...
he/she is going into more eechi worl although it is nice.

Alright lets get down to business. You wanted a rating/crtique on your art? I havent done it for quite some time (MT poeple need some rest too you know).

For me, I've seen many versions of this made by different people but yours by far is the best i've seen as in an earthly form whereas others have the scan placed in clouds, mist.... so on. wait WTF the scan looks like Hime Mononoke. The quality and the style look like those of the Ghibli studio. Oh well it was a good anime. But im sorry to say that the background doesnt not suit the picture much although the foreground: grass, ground, misty does. Its just that there is no indication in the scan that they care about the town behind them, rather they are looking onwards, forwards.
But I guess that It can comply to your title 'A new beginnning' as in the sense they are leaving town and starting something new.
As for quality, excellent job. I have seen this scan many times and it has awesome quality. You did the background good also.
Well, lets see... i give my ratings out of 10. So you would have to have scored a:
8.75/10. Great work Enternal.
~ Sukumei san/kun whatever

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nice its even got the little logo thingy

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Ah so this is a tohou and pretty recent too.

Okay lets start with the characters. From what I can deduce, the fairies are trying to annoying the devil girl with magic hence the blue orbs in the background right?
The other girl is trying to study and the expression on her face and the position of her hands make her look like shes really bored. The fairies are the only source of light in the whole room except for those floating blue orbs. Makes it feel a bit like Harry Potter.

Okay...
Good points:
-The background perfectly matches the mood with the girl sitting down.
-There are shadows for every object
-The mood and theme are conveyed perfectly
-Quality of the picture was good

Bad (or should I say could be improved) points:
-The girl sitting should show some reaction at the girl falling over like anger or surprise or something. perhaps a change in facial expression?

Otherwise from that little mistake, the art was very well done. I can see that you put a lot of effort into it.

****/***** good work!


Hey you complained about the lack of art critics at Mt here anyways. Looks like ur right and all you received was good work and stuff. Well you inspired me anyways. cya around

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holy shit you drew that? GRRRR JEALOUS *blush*

merged: 10-24-2006 ~ 03:42am
holy shit you drew that? GRRRR JEALOUS *blush*

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wow 4chan... -_-" so typical of MT users lol

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nice sweet! yeah!

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thats the best pocky ad ive ever seen wow lol. nice scan there too. Oh and pocky costs 1 dollar over here... if you know where to get it...

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thats amzing. really captures the innocence. such a cute blush :D.

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its cute but its from a h-game. Why are al cute ones from h-games?

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its very basic and simple. I liek it

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Omg where did you get such a beautiful picture. Shes one of my favourite characters. THank you so much!

Okay for some consturctive critism. The tree looks a bit too real and you can kinda tell that its a background with a scan. Prehaps make the sand around her a** sink in a little. Ciao and thanks

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whoa very nice wall. and seductive too... its kinda freaky dont ya think?

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how bigs ur tablet? my dads one is massive damn. We'll ill get one when i need one i suppose

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what the hell is tony taka?

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that is damn straight right into the point... haha

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lovely and yopu are lucky im spending my school internet money on this crap

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i love this one. well for once it focuses more into the items intested of the character.. a good change

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i love this one too

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wow i love this too

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damn love that

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this is actually my favourite out of all of your works. Well you should know that i have a sort of an affinity to nature and look at that! Its so great meldanya! (I bet no one can understand this word!)
You are so great Thu HA!

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i knew this was yours from afar....

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